domingo, 8 de noviembre de 2015

Last Friday



Last Friday was an awesome day, one of my friends named Sara made a big party because she will be fifteen years old. So, she invited many people and it was kind of a big deal that party. The party was at this new place on a beautiful garden with many  outside decorations. My friends and I gathered at marysofy´s house before going to the party, but we never imagined that when we got there it would start raining. We entered the place and all the guests were in this hall and the employees were moving all the stuff into the ballroom. But the problem was that many things were wet, and the ballroom was not decorated as beautiful as the garden.

Many people left the party, but most of them stayed waiting for the music to start. so everyone would start dancing.  My friend Sara was wearing a beautiful beige dress and her hair looked really great. Everyone for a moment thought that the party will be boring or bad, but it was quite the opposite.


At the moment the Dj turned on the music and turn off the lights, everyone got to the center of the dancefloor and started dancing. Honestly it was one of the best parties I have ever gone to. I was dancing with my friends and i saw many people that I knew. So, yeah... I really enjoyed Friday night.

1 comentario:

  1. Susy- I think it's awesome that you enjoyed Friday night! you do a great job of describing what happened, but I think that you could expand a little more on the so what of the piece. Why do I care about what happened? Maybe you could talk about how it rained and so you thought the party would be bad, but it ended up being super great and that sometimes our expectations don't always align with reality and that can be good or bad, but for you it was better. If you make that more clear you will have a wonderful post. Thanks for sharing! :)

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